Monday, February 24, 2014

Topics for Essay #2

Choose one of the following topics for your second essay:


Stories that contain dark humor usually have a serious intent; often it is to illustrate the weaknesses of mankind with the hope of reforming man’s behavior. Discuss how the stories of both Flannery O’Connor and T. Coraghessan Boyle reveal man’s foibles.

Irony is an important element in the three humorous stories we read. Choose either “Good Country People” OR “Carnal Knowledge.” Analyze the irony in the story and why the author chooses to use the irony as the story develops. (For example, explain the irony in the names used in “Good Country People” OR the irony of the ending in “Carnal Knowledge.” Obviously, these are NOT the only instances of irony in either story, but suggestion of what you might look for.)

Titles of stories are often significant, as they are in all three stories. Discuss the relevance and significance of the title to the stories: “Good Country People,” “55 Miles to the Gas Pump,” and “Carnal Knowledge.”

Mark Twain said, “All humor comes from pain.” In what way do the authors—Flannery O’Connor, Annie Proulx, and T. Coraghessan Boyle—use humor to  mitigate cruelty in their stories? Despite their use of humor, do these authors suggest the theme of man’s inhumanity to man in their stories?

Wednesday, February 19, 2014

Discussion questions over "Carnal Knowledge" by Boyle

1.       What does the phrase “carnal knowledge” refer to?
Carnal knowledge is an archaic or legal euphemism for sexual intercourse.[1] The term derives from the Biblical usage of the verbknow/knew, as in the King James Bible and other versions, a euphemism for sexual conduct. "And Adam knew Eve his wife; and she conceived, and bore Cain, and said, I have gotten a man from the LORD." – Genesis 4:1. (Wikipedia )

2.       What attitude does the narrator initially have toward meat?  In what way does this attitude seem to carry over to sex by the end of the story?

3.       How does Jim meet Alf? Explain the possible symbolic significance of this manner of meeting.

4.       A large part of the humor in this story is derived from the ironic outcomes of situations in which Jim seeks to be heroic. Identify those episodes. Why was Jim so desperate to appear heroic? How did the ironic twist become amusing?

5.       Agree or disagree with the following statement made by Jerry Curtis: “The short story “Carnal Knowledge” is hilariously perfect illustration of the fact that we men will do and say anything for sex.

6.       IN what way could Jim’s attitude toward meat—or sex—be symbolic of society’s desires? 

7.       How does Boyle use humor as a device in this story to make a statement about all of us?

8.       Would this story be offensive to animal rights’ groups? Is it intended to be? Why do you think Boyle chose this group rather than another group of activists?



Monday, February 17, 2014

Unfinished Comments on Essay #1

NO 1st or 2nd person in literary essays


Titles of stories should be in quotation marks, not italicized


Common correction abbreviations:


agr = agreement error


exw = more exact or accurate word needed


bw = better word should be used


cs = comma splice


mspld = a word, phrase or clause has been misplaced


ww = wrong word has been used


ts = faulty verb tense shift was made


awk = awkward wording or expression


Most frequently written phrase on papers: BE SPECIFIC


Do NOT re-tell the story; focus on analyzing a particular point: initiation, setting, or symbols


DO NOT REFER TO SOMETHING IN A VAGUE MANNER!!


Example: Myop is neither innocent nor completely aware of what she has stumbled upon, after the enters the woods.


OUCH!!  Revised: After she walks farther along in the pasture, Myop innocently steps into the skeleton of man who was presumably lynched.


Something that will help: READING THE STORIES before writing the essay AND taking notes as needed in class.

Tuesday, February 4, 2014

General Notes on Comedy and Humor - these will be amended, as necessary

IMPORTANT NOTES:
Not everyone finds the same thing amusing!!
It takes intellect to see the humor in some situations, especially satire.


Two broad types of comedy or humor:
* satire - developed first, in Greece
     ~ irony: an incongruity of some type; if you've never gone to The Onion, you may not have experienced modern, written satire.
    
* romantic comedy - think "sit-coms;" a minor problem develops, but the confusion is solved and "all's well that ends well," in the span of 30 minutes; think mistaken identity; chaos from eavesdropping, etc. The major characteristic of this type of comedy is that the ending is usually happy or satisfying, as opposed to tragedy, which often finds the heroic protagonist (with the tragic flaw) dead or in permanent misery. Although enjoyable and entertaining, this does not often make for meaningful literature (unless it's Shakespeare).


* gallows humor/black humor/dark humor - many different kinds; think of M*A*S*H, if you've ever seen that old show; think of people who tell jokes of events that are decidedly not funny; gallows humor is used when a situation is so awful that one uses laughter to relieve the situation; some examples can be found here The Darwin Awards, Not all gallows humor involves death, but there are always grim aspects of this type of humor.


OUR focus will primarily be  satire, with some gallows humor. For Monday, READ:
"Good Country People" by Flannery O'Connor; keep in mind:
*irony--appearance vs. reality, especially in terms of the Bible Salesman
*name symbolism and double entendre--in the Bible Salesman's name: MANLEY POINTER and in the Freemans
*significance of the protagonist's name: Joy-Hulga
*significance of clichés, used deliberately in the story: "salt of the earth," "good country people"
*look for all manner of irony





Humour Writing Versus Comedy Writing
Similarities and Differences
What are the similarities and differences between humour and comedy writing? The words humour and comedy are often used interchangeably. Both terms have certain elements in common. Both also have certain differences. Writing humour is not the same as writing comedy.
Usually, the humorist writes an essay or article or filler that is amusing or funny. The humorist’s material is intended to be read. On the other hand, the comedy writer writes material to get laughs, usually in front of a viewing audience. Comedy writers are best known for writing material for situation comedies, comedy films, stand-up comics, and sketch comedy.
Humour writing and comedy writing are often based on truth. Both frequently use the same humour devices, such as irony, satire, exaggeration.
Both use the anecdote and storytelling. Both frequently require a setup and punchline.
Both use wordplay and the one-liner.
The intention of both is to create a comic effect. The humorist tends to write about subject matter that is funny. The humorist also writes about serious subjects or topics with the intent of making them funny. So does the comedy writer.
Humour writing and comedy writing are in important part of popular culture. Most magazines and newspapers include humour columns, articles, and essays. There are bestselling books that use humour and comedy to entice readers to buy the book. There are popular TV sitcoms and comedy films.
As well, both humour writing and comedy writing can be found on the Internet. To find humorous articles or columns on the web, check out your favourite newspaper or magazine. As well, visit the following popular websites:
§  The Onion at www.onion.com
§  The McSweeny’s Internet Tendency at www.mcsweeneys.net
§  College Humor at www.collegehumor.com
Despite the similarities, comedy writing and humour writing are different in certain respects. For starters, most comedy writing is intended to entertain by provoking laughter, while most humour writing is more subtle and cerebral, intending to amuse, inform, educate, and persuade the audience to change its opinion. That being said, often humour writing provokes laughter in the reader.
Most humour writing is done for print publications, such as newspapers, magazines, or books. On the other hand, most comedy writing is done for TV sitcoms, comedy films, comedy sketches, and stand-up comedy.
Unlike the comedy writer, humor writing can take the form of “filler.” The filler is a joke, quote, or short anecdote that is used to fill space at the end of a column or page. According to “Comedy Writing Secrets”, there is no formula for“filler.” Good filler is one that the reader will want to quote or share with a friend. Reader’s Digest receives and endless number of fillers each month from aspiring writers and humorists. It publishes the best.
Opportunities to write humour or comedy are everywhere. Yet, before you can write funny or amusing material, you need to know how to write well. You also need to know how to use the popular humour and comedy devices, such as irony, satire, exaggeration, the one-liner, and wordplay.

Dick Gregory on the difference between comedy and humor:
Bill Cosby – Dentists:



Monday, February 3, 2014

Topics for Essay Number One

Student’s First and Last Name
Mrs. Sharon Aiken
English 1102-[section number goes here]
February 3, 2014
Topics for Essay Number One
              Please note that topics for this essay are being presented in MLA format, just in case you need a brief reminder of presentation appearance. It has one inch margins all around, it is double spaced, uses twelve-point, plain font, with an appropriate header and heading. The title is also in plain font and gives an indication of what to anticipate in the paper. Note that the title is not boldfaced, underlined, italicized or in any way different from the font used in the paper.  For further assistance on format, refer to the MLA guidelines available at Purdue’s online writing lab [OWL]: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/
              Topic one: A story centered on initiation requires that the protagonist undergo a significant change, often from naiveté to an awareness that the broader world is not as simple or benevolent as it was once perceived. Explain the revelation(s) the respective protagonists’ experience. (Note that the writer must clearly illustrate the character’s beliefs before and after their initiation experience.)
              Topic two: The setting of a story involves both time and place and by its manipulation, the author creates the mood and atmosphere appropriate to the tale he tells.  Explain and illustrate how setting enhances each of the stories of initiation. In other words, how is the setting appropriate in the story.
              Topic three:  Symbols represent much more than superficial qualities or objects, and when incorporated into a fiction, enhance the story and reinforce the theme. Discuss one or two important symbols from each story, explaining how the use of each underscores the point of the story.
             


RUBRIC for Essay #1

The purpose of essay #1 is to take an element of fiction and illustrate how it is implemented in specific examples from the stories read and to demonstrate an ability to write a formal, collegiate essay, written in third person, in MLA format. Minimum Length: 2.5 pages. (If there are any questions regarding what constitutes a half, fold the paper horizontally in the middle. Voila! In other words a “half” does not mean three lines.)


CORRECT MLA FORMAT - 10 pts.
~ Correct header
~ Correct heading
~ Title is in correct placement, font
~ Double spaced
~ Correct margins

Introduction - 15 pts.
~ Interesting/adequate opening introduces topic
~ Makes thesis statement regarding the element to be analyzed

Body Paragraphs - 25 pts.
~ introduces the stories and authors and supports thesis statement through specific examples presented in each story
~ contains an implied or explicit topic sentence

Coherence & Unity - 25 pts.
~ information is in a logical, interesting order & sequence
~ no illogical OR unnecessary statements to distract
~ paper is fluent; flows with adequate transitions so that ideas are easily followed

Grammar & Mechanics - 15 pts.
~ At the LEAST, the essay has NO:
                                    misspelled OR misused words
                                    fragments OR comma splices OR run-on sentences
                                    faulty tense shifts
                          pronoun/antecedent errors
                                                vague pronoun references

Conclusion - 10 pts.
~ intelligent, relevant, compliments the paper
            ~ leaves reader with positive impression of composition as a whole
                       
In addition, an "A" paper contains exemplary language, correct usage, and insight—these qualities  separate a paper that is exceptional or outstanding from a paper that is very good.
           
[In the event your paper is written so poorly that it causes my eyes to pop out, my hair to be torn out by the roots, or relentless head-banging against the wall to ensue, you will be in dire consequences, subject to smart-ass comments and disdainful rebukes.]