Monday, February 17, 2014

Unfinished Comments on Essay #1

NO 1st or 2nd person in literary essays


Titles of stories should be in quotation marks, not italicized


Common correction abbreviations:


agr = agreement error


exw = more exact or accurate word needed


bw = better word should be used


cs = comma splice


mspld = a word, phrase or clause has been misplaced


ww = wrong word has been used


ts = faulty verb tense shift was made


awk = awkward wording or expression


Most frequently written phrase on papers: BE SPECIFIC


Do NOT re-tell the story; focus on analyzing a particular point: initiation, setting, or symbols


DO NOT REFER TO SOMETHING IN A VAGUE MANNER!!


Example: Myop is neither innocent nor completely aware of what she has stumbled upon, after the enters the woods.


OUCH!!  Revised: After she walks farther along in the pasture, Myop innocently steps into the skeleton of man who was presumably lynched.


Something that will help: READING THE STORIES before writing the essay AND taking notes as needed in class.

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